Tutor comment: he suggest me to add a company into system map. he was thinking that manufacture is deliver products to company, the company deliver to rental sopts. also he point out that the story board not interesting enough.at the end of this story i need to add a story of repair the product to make the whole system works together.
peer comments:
- my system map looks so colorful, maybe makes them into single color and make them more professional
- in the story board, instead of putting three rental spot together, maybe i can pretend they rental from one spot then return to the other spot. that will make the story board more interesting.
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